Tuesday, 16 June 2020

Snippet of writing

Today I done a snippet of my writing. It is about how twins fell through a closet and into a very pretty place.

Here's my Snippet!

They fell onto snow, it was a really beautiful place. There were trees everywhere with snow all over the
top of the leaves. “Well, at least we won't get found. Right?” Tayla nervously asked. Someone jumped
behind them and grabbed them. They lost the way they fell down. 
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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous17 June 2020 at 13:41

    Hey Corina,
    This sounds like an awesome book, and something that I would find in a book store.
    I cant wait to see what happens next!
    From Chelo

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