My Narrative

W.A.L.T Write an engaging narrative.

Today I had to post my narrative to my blog. My narrative is about twins that got trapped in a weird place. But they had to find someone to help them get out. I wrote this because, I looked on Pobble and I thought this would be fun to write about.

Have you written a Narrative before?

Here's my Narrative!

It was a bright and sunny day, and there were some twins called Layla, and Tayla. They are identical, they both had long blonde hair, bright green eyes, but they had completely different personalities. Layla was a girly girl, and Tayla didn’t really care. In one day, it will be their birthday! They invited as many friends as they could, their neighbors came, family, and friends. But on their birthday, while they were playing hide and seek, they somehow found a secret room. The Twins couldn't escape until they found someone that helped them find the way out.

“Yay! I can't believe we're finally turning five tomorrow! I can't take it anymore! I have to scream even louder! Louder than my las-” Screamed Layla.
“Shh, I am trying to sleep!” Replied Tayla. “Oh, sorry” Whispered Layla.
Layla stuffed her head in her pillow and squealed. Layla was excited for many things and she couldn't help but scream. Tayla blocked her ears, then after like 5 minutes, until she finally fell to sleep. But Layla woke up every hour, and looked at the clock to see what the time was.  Every hour she would wake me up and whisper in my ear, “A few more hours until m- our birthday” Then she woke me up at 8:00am and screamed “Its our birthday!” Layla jumped everywhere around the room. “Everyone is coming at 10:00! We have to get ready now! I am gonna put on my favourite dress! This is so exciting!!!” Layla Screamed. Layla came into her room again wearing a bright pink dress, she was also holding another purple dress, “Here put this on!” Layla said and gave Tayla the purple dress. “Nope, I am gonna wear my pyjamas all day” Replied Tayla. “What no! You have to wear this! Just put it on!” Screamed Layla. “Nope” Answered Tayla. Tayla stayed in her pyjamas and went back to sleep. Later on, Tayla was still sleeping, and everyone had arrived. Luckily, she just woke up so she didn't miss out on anything.

When everyone got there they all put the presents on the table, “Let's play hide and seek!” Shouted one of their friends! “Ok! I am not in though” Replied Layla. “I'll be in, I like being in!” Answered their neighbor. Everyone hid, Layla and Tayla hid in a closet. Layla saw a lever on the side, she thought it was just something that was a part of the closet, so she pushed it down. The bottom of the closet opened really fast and they fell down. “Ahh!” Screamed Layla. They fell onto snow, it was a really beautiful place. There were trees everywhere, covered in bright white snow. The snow was as white as a blanket. “Well, at least we won't get found. Right?” Tayla nervously asked. Someone sneaked behind them and grabbed them. They ran with them, as far away from the door as possible.

They tried running backwards, but they couldn’t find anything. They were scared, and lost. “Maybe we're just dreaming! I hope” Layla said. “Yeah! You’re right! We probably are!” Replied Tayla. Suddenly they heard loud footsteps stomping behind them. Getting closer and closer. They looked behind them, but nothing was there. “Did you hear those footsteps?” Whispered Tayla. “Yes, but no one is there. Probably just our imagination. We have gone crazy here!” Answered Layla. They continued walking forwards, then they heard loud bangs underneath them. There was a big crack in the ground, then they heard footsteps behind them again. It started snowing badly. They were cold but they didn’t give up. They were sure they were gonna find a way out. “See! I was right to wear my pyjamas!” Tayla proudly said. Then the footsteps stopped, the snow calmed down, and the crack started coming back together. “Phew! I thought we were gonna die!” Shouted Layla.

After hours of searching for a way out, they found a little house. It looked like it was warm, so they went to it. “You should knock, I don’t want to, can you do it?” Layla asked. “Fine. But next time we go knocking on someone's door, you’re knocking” Replied Tayla. Tayla knocked on the door, and they heard someone stomping loudly coming towards the door. Layla and Tayla backed up hoping the person inside wasn’t gonna hurt them. The door opened then, “Dad?!?” Layla and Tayla shouted. There Dad had been gone for a few months, and he was living there for ages! “Dad! Is this where you have been!? How come you never told us?” Shouted Layla. “I wasn’t intending on living down here. I saw the lever and I pushed it, then I fell down. I couldn’t find a way out so I decided to live down here. I built this little house because it gets cold” Their Dad replied. “We can’t stay here! I want to go home!” Shouted Tayla. “Yeah! Let’s go find a way out!” Answered Layla.

They ran around to try and find a way out but they couldn’t, it started turning dark. And they still haven’t found anything. They heard someone whisper behind them “You will never escape” They were all terrified, they didn’t know what to do. They knew someone was following them. They all stayed together so they wouldn’t lose each other. They walked everywhere but they couldn’t find anything. They walked for hours, then they found a hole. Their Dad slipped down so Layla and Tayla went down too. The hole leads to the outside of their house. They had finally made it home.                                                                               
                                                                                                                                                                             
When they got home, everyone was gone, they all went home. Everyone was sad they missed their birthday but they were happy to be home.
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