Wednesday, 10 June 2020

Snippet of my Narrative


Today we had to get a Snippet of our writing and explain what is happening in it.

Have you done a snippet before?

Here is my Snippet!

One day, there were some twins called Layla and Tayla. They were identical, they both had long blonde hair, bright green eyes, but they had completely different personalities. In one day, it was gonna be their birthday! They invited many friends, But while they were playing hide and seek, they somehow found a secret room. The twins could not escape without the help from someone they found.

This is the introduction of my Narrative, it's explaining my characters and short hint of what my story is about.
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous10 June 2020 at 09:35

    Hello Corina,
    I Like your Snippet of your Narrative.
    I cant wait to see the full story!
    Great work keep it up!!!

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  2. Miss Holland12 June 2020 at 18:56

    Hi Corina,

    Thank you for sharing your snippet of your writing. I like how you have given us some information about your characters. I wonder if you could add some information about how they have different personalities. Where were they playing hide and seek? You haven't told us.

    What has been your favourite part of writing this so far?

    Have you thought of a title for your story?

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