Do you do quick writes?
Here is my Quick Write! It isn't done yet by the way.
Today I was walking to school then I saw an old man about to get hit by a car. I immediately
jumped to save him! He apologized to me because I had dropped all of my school stuff out of my
bag. He helped me pick my stuff up and put them back into my bag. Then I realized I had to run
to school because I was gonna be late!
jumped to save him! He apologized to me because I had dropped all of my school stuff out of my
bag. He helped me pick my stuff up and put them back into my bag. Then I realized I had to run
to school because I was gonna be late!
I got to school just as the bell rang. I went to sit in my seat but there was a new girl. She pushed
me off and I fell onto the floor. “Why are you sitting on the floor?” Asked the mean girl. I saw her
giggling with her friend. But I ignored it and went to go sit by another girl. I said hi and asked if I
could sit by her. She said yes! I was so relieved. “Hi, my name is Lucy! What's yours?”
Questioned Lucy. “Sienna” I answered. “Nice to meet you Sienna!” Lucy happily said. “Nice to meet
you too,”
I replied.
me off and I fell onto the floor. “Why are you sitting on the floor?” Asked the mean girl. I saw her
giggling with her friend. But I ignored it and went to go sit by another girl. I said hi and asked if I
could sit by her. She said yes! I was so relieved. “Hi, my name is Lucy! What's yours?”
Questioned Lucy. “Sienna” I answered. “Nice to meet you Sienna!” Lucy happily said. “Nice to meet
you too,”
I replied.
Suddenly the classroom started shaking. “EARTHQUAKE! EVERYONE GET UNDER YOUR
TABLES” Shouted the teacher. I wasn't that worried because it was only tiny but suddenly it got
bigger! Things started falling off the walls, there were lots of kids crying, and our teacher didn't
know what to do because she was new to teaching and had never been in an earthquake before.
Then out of nowhere a wall fell down and it trapped us in the classroom!
TABLES” Shouted the teacher. I wasn't that worried because it was only tiny but suddenly it got
bigger! Things started falling off the walls, there were lots of kids crying, and our teacher didn't
know what to do because she was new to teaching and had never been in an earthquake before.
Then out of nowhere a wall fell down and it trapped us in the classroom!
Then the Earthquake stopped. I was so relieved that I didn't get hurt, I thought no one got hurt
but there was one student stuck under a bookshelf that had fallen over. My teacher attempted
to lift the bookshelf up but she couldn't. So she asked us all to help her. We all lifted the
bookshelf up and the student under the bookshelf was fine! He was on his phone watching
youtube! He didn't even know there was an earthquake!
but there was one student stuck under a bookshelf that had fallen over. My teacher attempted
to lift the bookshelf up but she couldn't. So she asked us all to help her. We all lifted the
bookshelf up and the student under the bookshelf was fine! He was on his phone watching
youtube! He didn't even know there was an earthquake!
Later that day when I was going home from school, my parents decided to surprise me with a
new Kitten! I was so excited, I jumped around my room everywhere! I had been asking for a
pet for ages now! Now I finally have one! It is a white cat with a little bit of black on its ears and
nose, she is a girl and I called her Coco!
new Kitten! I was so excited, I jumped around my room everywhere! I had been asking for a
pet for ages now! Now I finally have one! It is a white cat with a little bit of black on its ears and
nose, she is a girl and I called her Coco!
After I got my kitten I told all my friends about her when I went to school! But there was this one
girl that thought I was using my kitten to get attention! So she made up a lie that would make all
of my friends go to her. “Hey! My Dad is bringing pizza to all of my friends! If you come to me
you can get some pizza!” Shouted Lila. I knew she just didn't want me getting all of the attention.
A few minutes later her dad with pizza. It was only the start of the day and I had been lonely all
day! I wanted to get my best friend Lucy but she liked Lila!
girl that thought I was using my kitten to get attention! So she made up a lie that would make all
of my friends go to her. “Hey! My Dad is bringing pizza to all of my friends! If you come to me
you can get some pizza!” Shouted Lila. I knew she just didn't want me getting all of the attention.
A few minutes later her dad with pizza. It was only the start of the day and I had been lonely all
day! I wanted to get my best friend Lucy but she liked Lila!
The next day at school everyone was talking about Lila. Saying she has been to the moon,
everywhere in the world, and that she is related to so many famous people! I knew she was
lying so I tried to expose her! She said her Right hand was sore so she got everyone to do
stuff for her. So I shouted “Hey Lila! Want a napkin!?!” I threw it at her! She caught it with her
right hand, “See you just caught that and apparently your hand is sore! LILA MORE LIKE
LIAR!” I shouted. Lila looked at everyone, everyone looked mad but then she said “I had to do
that! If I didn't it could have hit someone in the eye! I just saved someone!”
everywhere in the world, and that she is related to so many famous people! I knew she was
lying so I tried to expose her! She said her Right hand was sore so she got everyone to do
stuff for her. So I shouted “Hey Lila! Want a napkin!?!” I threw it at her! She caught it with her
right hand, “See you just caught that and apparently your hand is sore! LILA MORE LIKE
LIAR!” I shouted. Lila looked at everyone, everyone looked mad but then she said “I had to do
that! If I didn't it could have hit someone in the eye! I just saved someone!”
Wow what an interesting Quick Write. I always love reading your writing! That isn't very fair on Sienna! I like how Sienna exposed Lila by throwing a napkin. Lila more like Liar is very clever! I like how you have used some alliteration. That was such a pathetic lie on her behalf, I hope the school kids don't believe her!
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