Writing

For writing I chose a picture from Pobble 365 and I done this one. It is about a kid falling into a painting and then they get stuck in it. Do you think my writing was interesting?

                      Alive

Today I had to go to the boring art gallery. My Mum loves going there But all it is
is some rooms with paintings! When we arrived my Mum stormed off to go look
at her favorite painting. She wants to be an artist some day, her paintings are
amazing! I pulled my phone out of my pocket and listened to some music on the
radio station, waiting for my Mum to finish at the art gallery.

My Mum snatched my phone out of my hands and told me to go look at the
paintings with animals on them. I went to the elephant paintings, I went through
the door, but I tripped on something on the floor and accidentally fell on the
painting! I leaned on the painting to see if I had a graze on my knee, but I
slowly fell back into the elephant painting. Then I was completely in the painting.

I heard elephants everywhere! I slowly looked up, then an elephant said hi to
me! I screamed, I don't know how I am gonna get out of here! If my Mum never
told me to go look at some paintings then I would have not been in this painting
but now I am! I will probably be stuck forever!

Suddenly I woke up, Phew it was just a dream. “Come on we're going to the art
gallery” Shouted Mum. Oh no!