The Abandoned Hotel

Today I made a narrative, About The Abandoned Hotel. It is about to twin girls that get trapped in a abandoned hotel. but they didn't know it was abandoned. This is my story and picture.

The Abandoned Hotel

One dark stormy night twin girls decided to go play outside in the front yard. Stella and Ella didn't want a jacket or an umbrella. They just went outside. While the twins went for a walk down the creepy street and they saw a hotel! An abandoned hotel. With blood all over the entrance. The windows were smashed and the blood was still wet.

Ella walked in, not knowing it was abandoned. Stella knew there was something weird about the hotel but she still walked inside. Ella thought it was empty she thought wrong! It was not empty it was full of scary creatures. Stella decided to look around Ella fell down a hole with a carpet over it, but Stella didn't know. So Stella continued walking. Since the hole was so deep Stella couldn't hear Ella calling for help. 

Suddenly Stella realised Ella was gone! She was panicking. She ran back to the entrance, Ella wasn't there! So she ran back to where she disappeared. Suddenly Stella fell through the hole and found Ella. But they didn't know how to get out.

It was dark, luckily Stella bought a flashlight she left in her back pocket. It worked for a few seconds then it blew up. Stella had just bought it and even put new batteries in it! Then she remembered she had some batteries in her pocket! They were relieved! She stuffed the batteries into the flashlight. They continued walking down the hall.  Suddenly a shadow sprinted past and slowly went around them and started speeding up every second and disappear after a while it was gone. Ella and Stella were terrified.

Ella waited for a second to make sure it was gone and to wait for Stella to hurry up. Ella and Stella slowly walked forwards walked slowly hoping nothing was there. Then another shadow came and started running after them. Ella ran fast, while Stella tried running as fast as she could, Ella looked behind her and it was gone. Eventually Stella looked behind her and realised it was gone! But that shadow made them even more lost! They continued walking down the hallway.

Suddenly a very loud scream came from behind them! Ella fainted! Stella decided to wait for her to wake up. 30 minutes later Stella fainted too! Eventually they woke up. But tied to two separate chairs! There was a lady going around them! Both of them cried!

The lady had to go to the toilet. So Ella and Stella somehow ran away. There was a ladder that they climbed up. They were relieved. As Ella and Stella continued running outside the lady grabbed their hair! Luckily they kicked her away. When the made it home they told their parents everything. They police knocked it all down. 

5 years later. The lady knocked on the door. The Mum, Dad, and the Twins were never seen again! All of the creatures invaded their house forever!